Khushi
stepped into the empty graveyard. The graveyard, a source of horror to many
others, was her sanctuary. Whenever she’d have a problem, she’d step into the
graveyard and think. This was her den, where the lion rested before the attack.
The IF thread - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3389861
Umm... I steal this idea from my dearest masam, and ask you all to pose any ONE question about the story and where it is going, but only on the IF Thread. I shall answer them as honestly as I can, without giving the future plot away. This is a meagre compensation to my delay in updating.
I know this update is short, but its important too. It has the details which frame an integral part of the story ahead.
With love,
-Vee
Khushi’s
restaurant had not been her dream, yet she was determined to go ahead with it.
The restaurant would be her back up. It was the perfect foil. Should anything
ever arise, the restaurant would still be there, holding her ass up. Also, the
restaurant would reflect nicely on the business. It was a chord of mutual
benefit. The business would get the restaurant its diners and the restaurant
would get the business its share of glory. It was nothing personal for her,
this restaurant. Just another business venture.
A faint laugh echoed in the dark
abyss of her mind, a sudden whiff of cardamom and chilly overcame her senses.
The memory flashed in front her eyes, colouring everything in its warm golden
glow. The graveyard abruptly shifted, and was replaced by a couch and a large
window. The shadows and shapes soothingly faded into each other. There were no
colours, only the golden of the warm sunlight, and the black of the shadows. A
voice echoed from somewhere behind, like the faint voice of a broken radio -
“We will open a small restaurant, all four of us. I’ll cook and he can look
after the business. You both will help us, yes?”
The
memory abruptly shifted, and the gold was replaced by the black of the
graveyard. Khushi shivered - her jaw taut, her breathing heavy.
A
phone call cut into her silence. She glanced at the caller ID, regained her
composure, and attended the phone call.
It
was nothing personal, this restaurant. Just a business deal.
* * *
After
ten years of service, Anjali had thought nothing would surprise her. She had
been proven wrong by the grave young man, sitting on her bed. She felt
irritated at this man, what on earth was his problem? Why was he after her?
With these questions whirling around her head, a single word dropped out of her
lips.
“What?” she snarled.
“I just want to-”
“Talk?” she asked, suddenly
angry. The throbbing in her head increased. She felt tired. After having to
fuck more than thirty men in a day, she had to deal with mad men ‘wanting to talk’.
“Yes” Shyam answered.
“What would you like to talk
about?”
Anjali answered. Anger wouldn’t get her anywhere, she knew it. She controlled
the poisonous flames choking the back of her neck. Control, she told herself.
“I am a writer and...”
“Oh, so one of your characters is
a whore?” The
anger level suddenly rising, for a reason she could not fathom. Calm Down! She commanded herself. The
anger had reached to her mouth, however. Try as she might, it wasn’t going back
in.
“When you put it like that-”
“What do you mean – put it like
that? IT IS LIKE THAT” She shouted, venom coursing through her veins. She noted
with a vicious stab of pleasure that the man jumped. The anger had won. “YOU KNOW HOW MANY MEN COME TO ME, SO I
SUCK THEIR COCKS? YOU KNOW HOW MANY? THIRTY. THAT’S RIGHT. THIR-FUCKING-TEE . I TRADE
SEX, SHYAM MANOHAR JHA, AND NOTHING YOU CAN SAY WILL EVER CHANGE IT. YOU KNOW, YEARS
BEFORE, I RAN AWAY FROM HOME TO BECOME A MODEL. LOOK AT ME NOW , HAVING
TO LET STRANGERS TOUCH ME IN
WAYS YOU
CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE, TO EARN MY LIVING. I DIDN’T PUT ANYTHING LIKE THAT, IT IS
LIKE THAT. I LIVE THE KIND OF LIFE MY MOTHER CONSIDERS NEXT TO
DEATH. I DON ’T EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM. I HAD DREAMS TO GO
BACK, AS A SUCCESSFUL PERSON, SO THEY WOULD TAKE ME BACK. LOOK AT ME NOW . DO YOU SEE A PERSON
WHO CAN SHOW HER FACE BACK HOME?”
Shyam
looked at her quietly. “Do you?” she
repeated forcefully, a fleck of spit flying from her mouth. Her mouth twisted
into a sarcastic smile, when her companion did not reply.
“I think we both know the answer.
Please leave, I cannot help you”
She
closed her eyes, and breathed in deeply. She heard the door close, and opened
her eyes.
With
a fleeting stab of guilt, she flung herself on the bed.
___________________________
A/N: Guys
I have my final exams from 15th march, so chapter eleven will only
be updated on 28th march, seeing as my exams get over on 26th.
I will try to update during my exams, but please don’t bank on that. Pray for
me guys, I need all the good luck. :)
PS – these
are my LAST exams for this session, so YEAH. NEED ALL THE GOOD
LUCKK.
Umm... I steal this idea from my dearest masam, and ask you all to pose any ONE question about the story and where it is going, but only on the IF Thread. I shall answer them as honestly as I can, without giving the future plot away. This is a meagre compensation to my delay in updating.
I know this update is short, but its important too. It has the details which frame an integral part of the story ahead.
With love,
-Vee
Short update! Poor Anjali! Thirty men in one day.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for your exams.
Hey V!!
ReplyDeletefirst of all, a heartfelt gudluck!!!
Honestly I dont know what to say. My mind is blank right now, and all i can say is I can just wait, to think and rethink and feel honestly, and then may be I'll be able to say something.
and now as i have been given a chance, i would like to pose a question, its an elaborate one, plzz dont get bored.
As i read, i see all the pics on my right hand side, which you keep in mind as characters. & the very first time i saw them, i was disappointed ( sorry :/). I mean, i cant get my head around the images of khushi and arnav as someone else than sanaya and barun, infact anyone else as shyam or anjali or even lavanya, naani was something i couldnt bring myself to..to..believe (!). then as your story progressed, i was able to digest it.. but still i cant understand, if you wanted totally newer characters as arnav,khushi , lav, anjali,devyani, shashi n payal..( i am not talking about only faces, but also the persona,the mindset, the thinking, the mannerism..each n every damn thing), you could have easily chosen some other names too--kartik,swati, anything!!! you have created entirely new characters, only the name remains same, and i cant really understand the reason!!
forgive me if i am breaching any sort of boundary, its a real curiosity,nothing else!!!
Hello!
DeleteCould you perhaps copy paste the question on the IF thread, if you have an ID there? I find it easier to answer there, so that everybody can see. :)
-Vee
yeah sure... :)
DeleteWho a glimps of the past life.....is khushi adopted or somethings..ceels like that...loved this chapter..it showed two women in different light...cant have enough of ure ffs . just love them..i know many typo mistakes but in a hurry ..have to run..exams are coming again..best of luck with ure exams!!!!!
ReplyDeletemeem17
Khushi wanting to open up a restaurant is anything but impersonal, but who was in the room, with the couch and the window? Who wanted to set up a restaurant - those 4 people?
ReplyDeleteShyam has impeccable timing. ;-)
Can he save Anjali?? I hope someone can....and Lavanya and the others...
Good luck with your exams Vee!
Bim
Moomin4455
Khusi has a past too??and who wanted to open the restaurant?why is she opening the restaurant as a back up plan..does she fear loosing her promotion?is she adopted??too many questions to be answered...
ReplyDeleteAnd Anjlai..sigh..what do I say??Life has been harsh on her and she has been in this profession not out of her own choice..
Although short this update was full of impact. U know something like chota packet! Lol! Anjali's emotions and frustrations were so well reflected!
ReplyDeleteWTF 30 people? Ugh.. Devyani is surely a slave driver!
All the best for your exams..:)
Anjali's condition really pierces my heart !!
ReplyDeleteKhushi on the other has such a magnitude of aura around her...its fascinating ,,, just keeps me wanting to divulge more into her past and gain an insight to her future !
Wish u all the best for your exams !! :)
Good luck with your exams. That was interesting. I really want to know more about the past!
ReplyDeleteVidhi ( vidhi_k)
A very intriguing update, Vee!!!
ReplyDeleteThe first thing that struck me was the fact that the graveyard was K's sanctuary...it felt like she found solace being near her mother's grave( am guessing it is so)...and, those glimpses of the past,was it her mother's wish of opening a restuarant, that she is trying to fulfill??? and,she mentioned four people...why do I get the feeling that she had an older sibling,and, I think I know who it is...and, the those reverberating in her mind about it being only a business venture, intrigued me...shall wait for the unravelling to happen...
It was heart wrenching to read about Anjali's life...her dreams and aspirations shattered to smithereens...with the added liability of social stigma and,the deprivation of family's love...Devyani is inhuman to make the girls overwork...???
Lastly, wishing you the very best for the exams...no queries from my end, cuz, I do not want to oppress you,unnecessarily...and, thank you for the PM :)
Aanchal15-IF
First Of all " All the very best for your exams Vee " Even though short it was a rocking chapter !!!! Khushi's sanctuary is a graveyard .... Can expect anything from Khushi Klepto Gupta :) This was the first time we had an insight into Khushi's past ...Her flashback in the graveyard . Felt terribly bad for Anjali when she shouted her frustrations on shyam ... Looked like she reached the end of her tether ... Hope someone gets them out this hell hole ... Though once you get in you cannot get out .... She came to the city with so many dreams and aspirations and look how it turned out !!! This is the case with so many girls from villages who come to the city to become something and end up in prostitution .... In such cases I feel we are so fortunate and have been brought up in such a sheltered upbringing...
ReplyDeletewow! Thirty is a huge number!! poor gal..must be so tiresome and irritating not being able to say no to those 30 men...
ReplyDeleteeveryone has dreams to do well so ur parents can be proud of u...n to have those dreams crushed is awful,especially wen d profession u chose is something u can never be proud of...
I just want Shyam to say more than he wants "to talk" to Anjali so maybe she wud listen to him..
Does Payal recognize Khushi and is her childhood friend? had they discussed to ope a restaurant we they were younger?....oh.well,time will tell!
All d Best!
Khushi calling the graveyard her sanctuary brings forth yet another facet to her character. I am guessing she finds solace near a loved one's grave. Her mother maybe? Her past seems to have a deep impact on her that she is determined not to acknowledge. Anjali. To have her dreams forcefully crushed is hard enough, but to have been forced down a line which she would never have chosen and knowing there is very little chance of ever being able to return home. It is beyond crushing. I can't even begin to explain how heart-wrenching it is. Thanks for the notif!
ReplyDeleteAnd good luck! :)
Anu (AnuMouli91)
Okay so a wild guess!
ReplyDeleteKhushi's mother. Her last wish, now buried and surmounted. The restaurant is either a good thing or a bad thing, but considering it's a business deal, I take it as running-away-from-the-feelings kinda thing.
Anjali- I thoroughly, thoroughly sympathize with her.
"DO YOU SEE A PERSON WHO CAN SHOW HER FACE BACK HOME?”
This was stabbing.
Intriguing update V, and besta luck!! xo!
interesting update....:-)
ReplyDeleteSurya.Ravi..:-)
Interesting update Vee.
ReplyDeleteKhushi obviously is hiding behind the fact that this is 'just' a business deal.
Its more for her....as her memories suggest. But why is she moving away from those thoughts? Who is the person who talks about opening a restaurant? Her mother? Or some other relative? I'm assuming Payal is a part of Khushi's past....so how come Khushi doesn't have any memory of her?
I felt SO bad for Anjali....and everybody who is a part of such a trade. Her outburst was very hard hitting.
All the best for your exams Vee! Rock them! :D
-Medha. :)
Thirty men in one day.... !!!! anjali's outburst sent chills down my spine...
ReplyDeleteAs for khushi, she obviously has a past... I wonder who four was she thinking about... friends???
will patiently wait for the next update:)
good luck for ur exams and come back soon...
so many questions came up in this update...
ReplyDeletekhushi wants to open the resturant as a back up plan. why?
thought she wanted to open it for her mom...
is payal her sister?
and anjali's life is too much painful...
hope shyam saves her...
IF ID 124555
So Khushi too has secrets..!
ReplyDeleteAnd obviously this entire restaurant thing is more than a business deal.
Now I'm almost sure that Khushi and Payal are related in some way..!
Anjali's life is so miserable..
I hope Shyam can do something for her..
Short but interesting update..!
Good luck for your exams..:-)
penguin143(IF)
Khushi has a secret!
ReplyDeleteSeems like Shyam won't be giving up anytime soon
Anjali's story is just too sad :(
Wow! You could feel the pain from Anjali! At the same time there is a lot more to Khushi and I think she is also living behind a facade of nonchalance! There is a lot more to all of them than can bee seen on the surface!
ReplyDeleteThe four persons in the room were Khushi and her family or she and her friends? So she wants the restaurant to fulfill a dream.
ReplyDeleteThe woman instigates the girls to commit suicide? Why do they allow her to come again and again?
Shyam keeps coming to Anjali. Will he help her to get away from this hell? Hope so.
khushi's sanctuary a grave. That is most likely to happen if she had lost someone very dear to her. Restaurant thing is definately personal.
ReplyDeleteAs, for Anjali I can't say much in this chapter, Shyam is definately annoying no argument over that, she is uneccessarily lashing out at the wrong person. 'Due to fucking more than 30 men in a day A woman loses her ability to think, strength to talk' but then whatever it is its not healthy for her mind too.