Khushi
watched with an expression of interest, as Arnav’s shirt was meticulously
removed. Her eyes traced the sinewy biceps, the scars on his back. They
followed his hair, spiky and wet. She noticed how his broad shoulders narrowed
down into lean waist, right down to the muscular legs. She noticed his
shoulders, tensed for the attack.
She
leaned forward with interest.
The
fight began, basic and brutal. Very brutal. She noticed how quickly Arnav
dodged the punches, his even more quick counter attacks. She noticed Arnav
Singh Raizada was good.
Khushi
curled her index finger at the attendant, and whispered something in his ears.
He bowed quickly, before proceeding to complete the task given to him.
The
first real shock came when a fist sliced through the air, and landed squarely
on Arnav’s jaw. The crowd groaned. Khushi watched, expressionless.
The
counter attack was brutal. Arnav’s punch connected squarely with his opponent’s
firm stomach. A knee flew upward to the opponent’s groin, and the said opponent
- bloody and beaten, sank down to the floor, accepting defeat.
Amidst
a crowd cheering happily, celebrating his win, Arnav picked up the
handkerchief, walked to Khushi’s seat, bent down on one knee, and smiled, his
palm open. The handkerchief, with its little smudge of mud, asked Khushi to
pick it up.
Khushi
lazily smirked, stood up and picked up the handkerchief, with a smile. She
walked out, her firm derriere swaying slightly. She slowed her pace slightly as
she neared the dustbin. She raised her right arm slightly, aware that a pair of
caramel-brown orbs were watching her.
She
threw the handkerchief into the dustbin, and walked out of the doors.
Arnav
smiled slightly to himself. The challenge had been accepted.
* * *
Lavanya
walked through the doors, with Anjali in tow. There had been another meeting
with Devyani. The last meeting still bought tears to Lavanya’s eyes.
The
meeting had started with Devyani sitting on a chair, and all the girls sitting
around Devyani, in a circle. Anjali, Lavanya had noticed, was looking at the
proceedings blankly. Lavanya had quietly sit down at the back, as the meeting
was commenced. Devyani had called Nirmala into the centre of the circle.
Nirmala had joined in with Lavanya... a fresh vibrant girl - who had done her
first job today. Nirmala stood in the centre of the circle, looking uncertainly
at the girls. Lavanya noticed that all of the older girls, had adopted similar
expressions of blankness. Like the night, expressionless and unknowing.
Two
minutes later, Lavanya had found out why.
“So
Nirmala” Devyani said, with a grandmotherly smile that did not reach her eyes.
“Today was your first job, yes?”
“Yes,
Devyani”
“Where
did he touch you?”
“Sorry?”
“Where
did he touch you, first?”
Nirmala’s
breath hitched slightly, as the conversation took a more menacing flavour.
“Uhh... my...”
“Your
breasts?”
“Yes”
“Did
he squeeze them?”
“Yes”
“How?”
“I...
I can’t...”
“Don’t
worry if you can’t tell me. You can show
me”
And
so, Nirmala proceeded to strip down naked, to show how she had been touched. All for money.
The
little stream of memory abruptly ended as somebody nudged her, sharply. She
winced slightly, and looked up, straight into Devyani’s eyes. “Lavanya, will
you come to the centre dear?” she asked, her tone clearly implying that she had
no actual choice.
The
meeting had commenced.
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Sorry guys, I'm totally winging this. Hope its not as bad as I fear.
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uff! challenge accepted! and i feel awful for lavanya.
ReplyDeleteI love this Arnav and Khushi... spitting fire! It's going to be an interesting and challenging ride! The whole La and the girls experience was brutal! Really enjoy your writing!
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OUCH!! dat was Mean,Khushi!!
ReplyDeleteArnav fought to get d handkerchief for
heaven's sake!!he even got punched on his
perfectly Handsome Face :)
No worries,M sure Arnav musthave already
thought of how to get bk at her...wud dat make
him petty??
oh,so humiliating for La and N ...I was
thinking wat a pervert Devyani is however wen
i saw her picure I burst out laughing!!Meryll
Streep!! ya bt she was D Boss from Hell in
Devil Wears Prada so I guess it wudnt take
much imagination to imagine her as Dveyani...
I cant wait to read d next meeting btwn A & K
...
Btw,still wondering y did Payal lie?
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the notif and the blog link! The ring sequence had me hooked. Khushi is something! I love your Khushi. Her seeming indifference to Arnav makes her so much more appealing. What exactly did she ask the attendant to do however? Challenge Accepted.Oh it'll be interesting to see what more is in store in this match.
ReplyDeleteLavanya's plight never fails to sadden me. Devayani is brutal. She seems to take great joy in belittling these girls.
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I love the title of your chapter.
ReplyDeleteChallenge accepted, meeting commenced. Two different situations yet abutting going on, parallel. Where Khushi acts all indifferent, smirky, Klepto... Lavanya and Anjali just have to face their nightmares.
The plight is so touching, and Devyani is such an enraging pain in the ass.
Arnav is hardcore and Khushi very hard to please - love these two!!
ReplyDeletePoor, poor Lavanya....perhaps she and even Anjali will find a way out of this?
Devyani is so bitter. Man, she needs to get laid; I bet that will totally change her outlook on life.
Oh my! I could soo relate Meryl streep with your devyani here..she was soo Miranda Priestly...only more subtly brutal!
ReplyDeleteAnd i just really wanna go and kiss this Arnav...man i can just feel the sizzle between him and Khushi....and Khushi....hell! she can't get better than this!!
Yeh dil maange more!!!! :D
xoxo
Arati (RTLicious)
Arnav Singh Raizada certainly won this round for me!!
ReplyDeleteBut i have to give it to our Klepto Princess who walked away in style !!
It reminded me of that Baazigar dialogue "Jo haar kar bhi jeet jaye use Baazigar khethe hai" :)
Devyani urghh!! When i thought she cant get any meanier you make her do this !! :(
Wow, I liked the way you described Arnav whence was in the ring, and the fight, all the characters and the pictures are true to how you make is imagine in the. Story....
ReplyDeleteSo much sizzle between the leads, just with the few lines you wrote here
Wonderful update
wow, so its finally ,started....arnav n khushi story well I simply love her attitude n arnav willingness...it was not just a kerchief but a silent war...
ReplyDeletedevyani is the limit in all, throwing the innocent girls in wolf hand n then insulting them...or maybe, making them used to the idea their body is their means of gaining money...
who will save the girls...u only knows..
march2011 if
So Arnav is good in the ring too.And I love your Khushi.I like the way she shows her indifference.
ReplyDeleteI really don't know what to say about Devyani..she is just horrible.Why the hell does she treat them like this.All because of her complex?First the girls have to go through with all the shit the men throw on them and then this demonstration ...
nice update...
ReplyDeleteloved arnav in the update...
but khushi was awesome also...
she just walked away...
she has so many layers to her character and it just makes her more attractive...
but i dont like devyani at all...she is just too much
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Poor La so demeaning... And anjali to have been through it I assume... I guess it's building up your shield....
ReplyDeleteArnav interesting chase he has on his hands.
Thanks for the link
The entire fight sequence was awesome..
ReplyDeleteLoved d attitude of fiery Khushi..
And then d Challenge..!!Can't wait 2 read more..
Devyani is a bitch..
Poor Lavanya.. my goes out 2 her..
Thanks 4 d bloglink n PM..:-)
P.S:I miss akash..
penguin143(IF)
Challenge accepted indeed!
ReplyDeleteKlepto at her best! And that's the way she is...and that's the way Arnav is too.
Poor Lavanya...and all the other girls there. To face a night with an unknown man taking liberties with you is bad enough...then comes the part of reliving it again......in front of everyone. So cruel.
Devyani is ruthless...and every single thing she does just proves that fact. The meeting has commenced.
Awesome..Arnav, khushi are just too good...interesting...update soon.:-)
ReplyDeleteSurya.Ravi..:-)
The fight sequence was superb and loving the fiesty Khushi.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to see how Arnav wins the challenge.
The way you described Arnav before the fight was simply awesome !!!! And loved the way Arnav fought :) Flt very bad for Lavanya yaar !!!! Poor girl has to go through so much debasement in the hands of a woman . But given her profession she has no choice . Terrific update Vee :)
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ReplyDeleteOh my god! Devyani so needs to be slandered! Like seriously.. She needs to be laid.. Ugh..
ReplyDeleteArnav and khushi get more interesting by the day... I n hooked! Challenge accepted!
Loved the first part...
ReplyDelete'Challenge Accepted'... they are match made in hell...
Felt awful reading the latter part...
nice update...
OMG That was total fun!!! As I said earlier I see you have turned characters 180 degree in this story and true to it Khushi was superb! I loved this side of her - here recovery and now this challenging attitude is simply wow ;) as for Arnav well I can't help it, he has been my weakness like forever, you know what I mean ;) so no matter how he is portrayed I love him the same - an this raw charming side it no exception!
ReplyDeleteScene at Devyani's it wasn't good when we see it from Lavanya and Nirmala's perspective but when you defined your characters, you mentioned about Devyani ad trust me after that am not surprised by her attitude....
However, I do wish you had gone a little deeper about the various feelings Khushi and Arnav were going through or may be thoughts... I felt a little incomplete without that..... :(
Thank you for the blog link. ... " the challenge had been accepted"... I love how how arnav n khushi are playing mind games. ... With each update I love this Khushi more n more. ...
ReplyDeleteI felt awful after reading about nirmala n lavanya....
I loved the dichotomy of the two situations...a bout won, the indifference and then , the challenge accepted...and, here the meeting had commenced..
ReplyDeleteI loved the minutiae that you penned,regarding the fight...K certainly loves to play games, and Arnav is cognizant of that,and,the genuflect ...very apt ...
Devyani is inscrutable...it was heart wrenching to read about Nirmala and La,...apparently the anguish they had suffered was inadequate...
And, I loved the alluring pics ( Meryl Streep as Deviyani is befitting)
Aanchal15-IF
Ouch poor arnav all that for nothing....khushi go girl
ReplyDeleteI like her attitude...what did she say to the other person...
It feels like that a power play is going on...cant wait for future updates...
And the last part creeped me out a bit...but i think it was nessessary to see the workings of this kind of world...really interesting..
Meem17
Arnav actually beat up the guy and Khushi didn't even wince once wow.
ReplyDeletePoor Lavanya going through all that, the world is cruel :(
Wow Arnav accepted the challenge while Khushi watched. That was quite a scene between these two! Really feel for Lavanya and the predicament that she's in!
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I hate this Devyani. Devyani is such an old and fimiliar name for me. There were two Devyanis I remember one belonged to the Ipkknd and another to Maryada (a show in Starplus. It was not popular show but, the show had such a feminine streak in itself, I couldn't help but fall in love with this show. And the way they ended it was much better than what we had in Ipkknd) and I grown to love them both. Why is this woman like so inhumane? I can't help but hate her. As for Arnav and Khushi no comments, I'm still confused. I definately don't know about Khushi but Arnav did manage to sweep me off my feet.
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