Tuesday 2 April 2013

Chapter Eleven - Enemy at the gates


Do you see a person who can show her face back home?

 

The room is a thick with buried emotions and brimming rage. Papers, screwed up into angry balls, lie strewn about on the floor. Shyam’s gaze is fixed on the ceiling, his armchair creaks as he rocks back and forth.

 

Shyam closes his eyes. His mind goes back to the days he lived under the thumb of his father, the army jawan - Colonel Amarjeet Manohar Jha.

 

Colonel Jha, for as long as Shyam remembers him, is a man with hair parting so straight and so white, that one might imagine he uses a ruler. His eyes are a bright brown, a special kind of toughness emanates from him. The colonel has thick, beefy and hairy limbs and a tongue as sharp as a pair of scissors.

 

The colonel is a strict, uncompromising man, and it is a source of constant wonder to him how he possibly could father a child like Shyam Jha.

 

Shyam looks at his published titles, carelessly lodged against the wall. He notes the awards on the shelf. Then he thinks of his father, who threw Shyam out of the house, declaring no son of his could take up a pansy profession like writing.

 

Do you see a person who can show their face back home?

 

No, he couldn’t.

 

* * *

 

Akash sidesteps a puddle and diligently walks towards the adress scribbled carelessly on a scrap of paper. This place is for the dogs Akash thinks, as the occassional druggie raises his glazed eyes to him. Then he remembers why he is here.

 

He would die rather than admit it, but he was glad he and Khushi Gupta were working on the same side. It really does pay, to have a person like her on your side.

 

He sidesteps yet another puddle, and stops in front of the house. 99B announces the cardboard strip. He walks to the door, and the door opens.

 

“I’m Akash, I’m here on behalf of Ms. Gupta, who had-” he announces, in a bored voice to the breathless woman.

 

“I know, I know” the woman says in a breathless voice. “I’m Anamika”

 

Akash stares coolly back at the woman. “No you aren’t”

 

The woman straightens up with some difficulty. “Excuse me?”

 

Akash stares back at the woman. “Khushi asked me to check all your records, and a very interesting fact popped up. That your name isn’t Anamika. Payal, that’s what they call you, isn’t it?”

 

“You need to-”

“I don’t even care why you hid your name from Ms. Gupta. All I care about is that I know your name, and you don’t want Khushi to know your name. The way I see it, you have a problem”

 

The shift in the air is palpalable. She stares at the uncompromising man, with the ghost of a smile.“What do you want?”

 

“I want you to help me ruin this restaurant”

 

Akash face twists into a full blown grin, when the woman stares at him, shocked.

 

The games hath begun.

 

* * *

 

A little crease on the smooth brow indicates Arnav’s mental state. The secretary trembles at her fate. All of Arnav’s plans to block the Gupta industries had been ripped to smithergreens, by none other than Khushi Gupta. But his plans had been discreet, nobody but he knew of them. Which meant there was a rat in the company.

 

Who?

 

“Leave” he orders brusquely, and the secretary scurries. Arnav’s temper was not to be tested. Arnav reaches for the phone, and hurriedly dials a number.

 

“Yes?”

 

“She’s more dangerous than I percieved. Get her out of the way”

 

Problem solved. All he had to do, was look for a white kurta, for the funeral.

 

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And I’m back!

 

A friend of mine, who sat with me and listened to my rambles as the story was conceptualized and the plot was formed, has a bit of an advice to give you. This is totally her words, and honestly, they don’t even make sense to me.

 

“A certified way to try and understand where the story is going, is to pay attention to the people, as opposed to what they are saying.”

 

*hands up* Like I said, don’t try to understand.

 

21 comments:

  1. Woah! Is Arnav ordering a hit on Khushi?? That's a little extreme for business rivalry. Is Akash intent on ruining the restaurant Khushi conceptualized? But he does say Khushi and him are working on the same side so maybe they are teaming up together to ruin someone else or he's planning to ruin her while right next to her. Either way he's going to be someone to watch. Shyam has a painful past too, nowhere as hard as Anjali's but one nonetheless. This is setting the mood significant things to happen ahead!

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  2. Oh My...I'm once again stumped!
    What was that last para? Arnav trying to bump off Ms Gupta??...but i dunno...something does not sit right there...is he talking about someone else? but if he isn't...you've just taken this FF several notches up!
    Can't wait for this to unfold...and i will take your friend's advice..i'll pay attention to the characters...
    Also the other conspiracy...Is Akash on Arnav's side? and he wants to ruin the restaurant...I would have thought that maybe Arnav was talking about killing of Payal...but that doesn't make sense...he's not talking about a small restaurant is he? he's talking about the entire Gupta empire? Eeeps! m gonna go maad!!! But i'm soo loving this plot..waiting eagerly for the next update!!xx

    Arati (RTLicious)

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  3. Honest opinion? I find the chapters too short! I need more.

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  4. ..... when first we learn to deceive...

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  5. Ah! so the net has been laid out...wonder who will find themselves caught in it, though..the predator or the prey??..
    Those are some sagacious words, articulated by your friend...I concur,fully..
    Eagerly await the next update, and, thank you for the PM :))

    Aanchal15-IF

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  6. I am totally confuse....cant make a head or tail of anything
    Payal is hiding her name from khushi
    Akash wants to destroy khushis restaurant
    Arnav wants to kill khushi
    Atleast sham is thinking something other than khushi
    And what khushi is thinking thats another headsche and mystery
    Cant wait for more chapters ... to know the motives
    And to clear my muddled brain
    meem17

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  7. Okay so an insight to Shyam, the child who got thrown out from his house for not choosing the "noble" profession, and I bet his dad must be thinking that how he can serve his nation and pride and generation by scribbles and rumblings, right? I totally understand where's he coming from, and thus, going to Anjlai, a tormented soul is not a surprise any longer.

    Aakash- man, I have a crush on him! Fast and discreet, smooth and devil!
    So the both men and now a woman are ready to target Khushi, the wild cat. I hope she gets her claws polished and shiny, but I want her to be two steps ahead of them.

    I hope.

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  8. interesting..continue soon..:-)

    Surya.Ravi..:-)

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  9. This restaurant? Meaning one of Arnav's is it? Or is it Khushi's? Because he has the means to blackmail Payal to do his bidding.Did Arnav just order a hit? On Khushi? I'll just have to wait for the next few chapters to know what is happening. The insight into Shyam's past was very well-written. Pansy profession? It does tell us why he relates to Anjali so much.

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  10. OK I'm kinda lost, but I think I know what your friend is talking about...

    Akash wants to ruin Khushi's restaurant.....Arnav wants Khushi dead??? Whaat???

    Bim
    Moomin4455

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  11. OMG SO MANY NEW TWISTS!!

    So Akash wants to ruin the resturant? O_O

    & Arnav is gonna kill Khushi? WTH!

    Shyam is in his own turmoil

    Very very interesting update

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  12. U sure know how to write a story..d best way is to intrigue people n find out their reactions n have them all ask/come for more. ...oh, god! My head's swimming wid all these revelations....secret, ruin, kicked out, mole, hit, death ..phew! A lot for one update!
    U r one talented writer. .. dnt doubt urself. .n kip up d great work! !!

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  13. thank your friend for the advice as il pay attention to that now
    they all have like a greyish side to their character
    Akaash is going to manipulate Khushi
    and Arnav wants to kill her
    aint Khushi a popular girl

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  14. Oh my god!....this chapter keeps you on edge!
    Akaash wants to destroy the restaurant !!!....is payal going to help him?
    And arnavs ordered a hit on khushi!!!
    Oh my god everyone seems to be out to get khushi

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  15. Whats up with everyone targeting Khushi !!!
    I hope she stands tall !!

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  16. Aakash wants to destroy the restaurant & Arnav wants Khushi killed..??!! Man..!!What's happening..??
    I wonder how Payal reacts to this..
    Shocking but interesting update..

    penguin143(IF)

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  17. What is happening?
    Why is everyone trying to harm Khushi..Aranv wants her killed..??seriously??
    I hope the plans of these two men fail

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  18. So Aakash knows Payal's secret.... im sure he'll use it to his advantage in the future... he wants payal's help in destroying a restaurant but I think Khushi's the one pulling the strings....
    Shyam's character is a bit of mystery... he obviously has family issues... but then there is his weird friendship with khushi n he keeps going back to anjali. .. need to know more about him...
    Arnav wants to get rid of someone...I dont think its Khushi... then who...dad's fifth wife???? just a guess
    brilliant work!

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  19. what the hell all is agianst that poor girl...man
    akash wants to ruin the resto n now arnav
    he already ordered a white kurta....
    i thought he was attracted towards her
    march2011 if

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  20. This was a shocker of an update !!!! Aakash wanting to ruin the restaurant was a shocker .... So was Arnav's call to get someone out of the way !!!

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  21. Interesting. Not quite sure what to make of it but looking forward to reading more. Vidhi_k

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